2008. 12. 22.

11 RULES OF WRITING - RULE 3

RULE 3 -- Do not use commas to bracket phrases that are essential to a sentence's meaning

RULE 3 -- EXAMPLES

Incorrect -- Correct

The man, who has too many ties, has too few necks.
The man who has too many ties has too few necks.

The cats, with six toes, are a unique attraction of the tour of Hemingway's house.
The cats with six toes are a unique attraction of the tour of Hemingway's house.

RULE 3 -- REFERENCES

More information about this rule is available from the following sources.

Online Resources:
The Elements of Style: rule 3

Printed References: (see References section)
Strunk and White: 1-3
Hacker: P1-e

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